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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: instead of saying *Jumps on player and kills them* I would say *Attempts to jump on player and kill them*
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by giving a character knowledge they shouldn't have, which then can give them an unfair advantage over other players or make the scenario unrealistic
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Darmus thredarr
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: 6'1, 180 lbs, brown hair, green eyes, and cloaks
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

"My story you ask..?" (Darmus states with a puzzled look on his face) "Well, I am originally from a small town within the dark forest. That town is called Riverland. When i was just a young lad, my father took me out far far away from town." (Darmus states while slightly chuckling) "Once we arrived at the chosen location, he pulled a long, dark, wooden box out from behind his back. He handed it to me slowly, while stating." "Open it my son!" "I took a look inside of the box and there I saw, what appeared to be an expertly constructed iron spear..." (Weeks had passed of Darmus training his skills). (Suddenly Darmus felt a sense of worry This unusual feeling compelled Darmus to rush back to his village) "My village is being raided by a HUGE band of goblin's!" (Darmus stated with an apprehensive tone) "I could take them on with my new spear skills." (Darmus figured) "As soon as I arrived I had got knocked away by an aggressive goblin. I overheard his crew name him as, Urgruff. Once I had hit the ground, I looked up and saw, my father being attacked by this so called Urgruff." One move after another Darmus's father was knocked down. Darmus jumped up trying to save him. "as I saw Urgruff impale my father through the heart. I ran to his lifeless body with tears in my eyes. I began screaming for my poor father to wake up. Soon after I had stood up, Urgruff began charging at me angrily. I fled to the nearest village called Shadowford. Once I had arrived i quickly warned the villagers. RIVERLAND IS UNDER ATTACK I scream horrified." Thats when a kind lady with the name Helga had taken Darmus in, as her own. To this day he still searches of Urgruff and wont stop until he get his revenge. (Also the map was broken so i couldn't find a place on the map to reference in my story sorry.)

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example of how you personally avoid powergaming & metagaming in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming.You can also learn more about combat roleplay here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks. Example: Judy laughs. “How are you doing?” 
  • Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person. Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.
  • In your Roleplay Response & Backstory, please use an unnamed location or a location already on the server, you can find more information on the Nations & Settlement WIKI Page.

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

My discord is @cheese1sgrater if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

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