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ColdAs_Ice

ColdAs_Ice

By ColdAs_Ice

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using outside Knowledge to benefit your character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is giving the other person no chance to make a decisions, such as "he would slash off his arm." instead of "He would attempt to slash off his arm"
    Status: Denied

A baby voice wailed as he was born, and was quickly quieted down as his father stared down at IT....

 

His wife had just given birth to a healthy Elf, but he hated it....he just hated it.

 

The Child was forced to stay with the King...

 

He was abused...beaten...a slave in his own home. Until one day he snapped. He flew into a rage and escaped, fleeing from his Abusive family.

 

Ventus DragonEyes...his will had just been turned into steel.

 

He is a prideful being, but quite. He tends to seduce woman, with a likable person appearance.. 

Woman are often blushing around him, taken by his looks.

He hopes to find love in the future.

Character Name: Ventus DragonEyes
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 118
Physical Description: 6,2
Purple Hair
Muscular
Purple eyes slitted pupils
Tan
Handsome
Pointy ears
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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saint swag

Your application is now;

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  • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect, please refer to the wiki pages provided. [Metagaming] [Powergaming]
  • Your characters backstory started well, but began to fall apart as you introduced the usage of magic and nonsensical character traits. Please remove the mentioning of lightning bolts, the God’s Blade and Lightning Warden, none of these things exist on Lord of the Craft. Alongside that, please expand on who your character is on a person, this is a much better approach than just trying to add powers to him.
  • Your character’s hair should not have lightning crackling within it.
  • Your character should not be one of these ‘Wardens’ and should not be able to wield an element, however, you may learn one of our evocations in game from a teacher once you’ve been accepted.
  • Please replace your ‘superhero’ weaknesses and strengths with things that will build your characters personality, our server is not about being the best or the most powerful, and isn’t ran on constant combat roleplay.

If you need any help with these changes, please contact me on Discord @pump action hex#4689, or join the New Player Discord through the link below.

https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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saint swag

Your application is now;

Pending

 

  • Please fix up your skin so that it works with your characters backstory and the server’s setting. This means the clothing and hair colour.
  • Please include a reference to our servers lore, this could be a place of birth, an event, a religion or a culture that your character celebrates. These can be found on the wiki.

If you need any help please feel free to contact me and apologies that I missed these two out, was exhausted at the time of reviewing.

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