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  • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: Xavier #8461
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When the outside player gains information that the ingame character would have no way of knowing and applying it ingame.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: doing unrealistic actions and events that the character couldn't possibly execute. ex: being 5 ft tall yet reaching an apple in a tree thats 10 ft tall without any external help.
    Status: Denied

 Born in Cuiviénen , on the shore of a large gulf in the inland “Sea of Helcar” (which my mother named me after) in the far east of Middle-earth. The land was an eastern bay of the Inland Sea of Helcar which was formed by the meltwaters of the pillar of Illuin. My mother went by the name Aerin, tall, elegant in tongue and stature, and had a voice so angelic it could bend the will of any mortal man. My father went by the name Logon, and named that for a just reason, ‘one who is warm at heart’. I cannot remember much of my childhood in Cuiviénen besides the fact that we had to flee our country-land after the First Age and the War of Wrath which left our homeland dry and desolate. On our journey we faced many perils, giant attacks, orc raids, and so on. During these fights for our lives I learned many combat skills and a little elf magic while watching my mother and father in combat. We continued our journey for 6 years, looking for a place to call our new home. During these years my mother and father taught me through tales of their past and from old scriptures that we took with us. We found a perfect location just north of Middle-Earth called Carn Dûm. Unfortunately to our demise it was inhabited by The Witch-King and his many servants. We were setting up camp in the mountains above, when we were suddenly attacked by the Witch-King and his servants. My father was slain first and during my mothers last breath she whispered a spell causing me to be frozen in a block of unbreakable ice. 

 

   Over hundreds of years I was frozen in this unbreakable spell cast by my mother, when on one laer (summer) day the ice that has imprisoned me started to melt. Slowly I regain consciousness, lost, confused, with nothing around me but some old dusty bones from a pair I cannot recognize.  I wander around and find myself in new terrain, and make my way abouts the land for a good while until in the distance I see a massive city on a mountain. I wander to the gates where I was met by individuals that resembled myself. They greet me and say “Welcome to Lareh’thilln fellow elf” I ask for directions to the nearest place of wisdom so I can figure out what era I’m in as well as the odd language spoken, similar to mine since I can somewhat understand, yet different. The two at the gate point me in the direction of something called “The Eternal Library” where they claimed houses the most books out of any realm. For that we shall see ourselves. Along my path to this esteemed place of knowledge I stumble across a cute little creature on a side street. It’s thick, fluffy coat reminded my of a pet I had during my childhood, a puxie if I do recall. I give it pats on the head and continue on. 

 


Character Name: Helcar
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 6 feet tall, long blonde hair (usually one long braid in the back) fair skin with green sharp eyes. sulk-in face weighing 160 pounds with a lean body.
Roleplay Scenario:

I firstly respond with my name “Hello there sir, I go by the name Helcar, may I ask yours?” *He continues* “Well it is very nice to meet you.” “I have arrived on this port in search of a library, to further my studies in the arts of arcana. For as you see I am a wandering scholar with a thirst of knowledge that hold no quenching.” 

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

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Hello! You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the required changes, and I’ll take another quick look at your application! ❤️

 

  • Your Powergaming definition gives me the feeling you have the right idea on It’s meaning, however, I’d recommend trying to find a better example that explain it. The current example you have is a bit confusing and gives me conflicting thoughts on whether you truly understand Powergaming or not. 
  • Your Character Biography was missing some of the required pieces such as two (2) lore pieces that relate to LotC or the world of Arcas. It appears you have done so, by adding information on Haelun’or and their iconic Eternal Library, though you have still have information that does not pertain to LotC. For example, ‘Born in Cuiviénen , on the shore of a large gulf in the inland “Sea of Helcar” (which my mother named me after) in the far east of Middle-earth. The land was an eastern bay of the Inland Sea of Helcar which was formed by the meltwaters of the pillar of Illuin.’ & ‘First Age and the War of Wrath’ & the mention of the ‘Witch-King’. These pieces do not have any relation to LotC or the world of Arcas, I’d recommend you remove it and fix it. Please only have Server references, real events, locations, and individuals that all pertain to LotC.

 

You can also check out the New Player Hub for guides, tutorials, and overall information for a New Player who might have a lot of questions. You can also join our LotC Main Discord- you would be able to ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. Lastly, you could contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns. 

 

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Your Application has unfortunately been denied at this time for not making the required changes within the given 24 hours as stated above. However, you are able to reapply at any time as long as you do the required changes:
 

  • Your Powergaming definition gives me the feeling you have the right idea on It’s meaning, however, I’d recommend trying to find a better example that explain it. The current example you have is a bit confusing and gives me conflicting thoughts on whether you truly understand Powergaming or not.
  • Your Character Biography was missing some of the required pieces such as two (2) lore pieces that relate to LotC or the world of Arcas. It appears you have done so, by adding information on Haelun’or and their iconic Eternal Library, though you have still have information that does not pertain to LotC. For example, ‘Born in Cuiviénen , on the shore of a large gulf in the inland “Sea of Helcar” (which my mother named me after) in the far east of Middle-earth. The land was an eastern bay of the Inland Sea of Helcar which was formed by the meltwaters of the pillar of Illuin.’ & ‘First Age and the War of Wrath’ & the mention of the ‘Witch-King’. These pieces do not have any relation to LotC or the world of Arcas, I’d recommend you remove it and fix it. Please only have Server references, real events, locations, and individuals that all pertain to LotC.

 

You can also check out the New Player Hub for guides, tutorials, and overall information for a New Player who might have a lot of questions. You can also join our LotC Main Discord- you would be able to ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. Lastly, you could contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns. 

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