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lshirleybird

By lshirleybird

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When a gamer uses their real life experience and knowledge to determine what their character should do.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is interacting in a roleplay for example in a certain manner to allow one to reach the goal quickly.
    Status: Denied

Her Royal Highness Princess Anastasia is from the Kingdom of Courland. She is the daughter of Tobias Staunton II. As a member of house Staunton, she has many duties she must uphold. As a proper lady she has much pressure on her to act a certain way. Ana does want to look as the perfect daughter in the kingdoms eyes, as well as her peers. She sits up straight, her hair is always neat, and never chews with her mouth open. These values of what it is to be a noble women have been put upon her since birth. Anastasia is kind, passionate, alluring, and always considerate. However, her personality is not all perfect. Ana can be quite hot-headed when people think she is wrong, and doesn't think about how certain actions will affect those around her. She is easy to trust, but not easy to forget. After her fathers disappearance, she was left in the care of her aunt Charlotte. Awaiting the arrival of her wedding day, and the hope that her father may one day return and bring back her will to live. She knows she will never rule Courland because she is a women. Anastasia is content just being the Princess. Her view of the world is small but, through efforts of diplomacy with her people; she hopes to grow her mindset. Anastasia enjoys the company of animals; mostly dogs. To keep her occupied she will typically be founds singing to herself in her bedchambers. When she sings to herself, the world seems to stop and all that matters is the notes. Most of all Ana wants to make a difference in the world she lives in, to be remembered for the good deeds. 

Character Name: Anastasia Staunton
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Anastasia has golden hair and ocean blue eyes. Her beautiful pink dress always sparkles in the sunlight.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Sookee

Wow, I really liked your application! I love the contrast between her alluring personality with her hot-headedness. A lot of people make the easy mistake to make their character much to perfect, but I understand it’s hard to create a character.

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Chimp

I know this is an AT’s job but i’d like to maybe just stir your app towards a good direction before you are put on pending..

You cannot be related to any nobles or famous persons without their express approval of it, you can however say you worked as a servant or guard for example.

The next part is also somewhat required to some degree, historical accuracy, it’s fine when its just small inaccuracies  or minor mistakes but, courland does not exist in Atlas. It appeared extremely briefly before being put down by a coalition. The proper long lasting courland however, was in Axios which was the previous map. And so for her to be a princess of the proper courland who is still alive, she would be in her late 70s.

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Dromui

Changed Status to Under Review

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Upon review, your application has been placed onto pending. You have up to 24 hours to make the necessary changes before the application will be denied. If you require any assistance throughout this process you can contact a member of the Application Team. Below you will find the necessary changes that must be made in order to be accepted:

  • Your definition of powergaming is incorrect. Take a look at the rules to find the right definition and fix it please.
  • Your backstory requires at least one reference to currently implemented lore on our server. On top of that, you cannot be a noble in your backstory.
  • Your interesting facts section requires at least one fault.

I recommend joining the LotC New Player Discord. You can find tons of folks willing to help you with your application and find your way once you’ve been accepted.

 

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Dromui

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As the 24 hour period granted has come to a close and changes have not been made, this application has been denied. If you require aid for future applications, you can reach out to the team and we will be there to help. Please make sure to make the appropriate fixes before your next attempt at applying. And remember the links provided to you are specifically there to help you!

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