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DivineBles
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: lan?#1036
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is a way to cheat in order to survive and reach the top without any hardships
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power gaming is making yourself immortal and powerful enough to wipe out entire nations
    Status: Denied

  After our father died and left us with elf's who  raised us along  with my  brother XuXu Wyrick  . Along the way we were not involved much with normal activities as we did not fit in. As we grew older we were separated  I left the elf's shortly after that. While living alone in the forest for a few years I came across a village where I lived until I was 18. There I learned communication skills, how to make money, and thrive. I am now looking for him but I have no clues on where to begin.


Character Name: Maiele Wynric
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Long Jet black hair, Dark green hoodie, Dark blue jeans, dark brown shoes lean body-build, 5'11, 155lbs
Roleplay Scenario:

"Good day sir" 

"I am here too look for my brother his name is XuXu Wyrick have you heard of him or know anyone who might have?"

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to these reasons:

 

Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help

Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please write in 3rd person, and please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

Your Physical Description mentions things like “jeans” and “hoodies”, which is too modern. Please fix that!

Your Biggest Fear, Likes, and Dislikes must be at least 2 sentences.

Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. Please talk in 3rd person as well.


If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord Chenn#6807, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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