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Dwardoe

Dwardoe

By Dwardoe

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: meme boi 969 #8260
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using outside knowledge inside a game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: minmaxing so as to obtain a goal quicker than normal
    Status: Denied

He was raised in urgaun partially by his mother and partially by his uncle, until at the age of 52 he left the city to seek fortune he wondered amongst humans elfs and orcs making a small fortune selling goods he scavenged and mined until he was robed by a group of orcs. robed of his money and supplies and 49 years older he made his way to urgaun hearing about underking  Mickael ireheart. His uncle told him of the founding of the NMU.

Character Name: Davroug coalgrinder
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 101
Physical Description: standing at 4'5" the young dwarf would be dressed in dirty white mining attire, on his right shoulder he would have a patch of the NMU. He's hair
Roleplay Scenario:

Davroug coalgrinder would reply with a larger smile “well ey seek wealt and fortune and to ‘elp me uncle” He would then swagger off towards his uncles home.

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SoulReapingWolf

Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

  • Your definitions on metagaming and powergaming are not quite right, I suggest you fix them and add examples to show your understanding of the concept
  • Your biography is good however you are still missing some more complete sentences and mentioning lore that belongs to the server, I suggest including at least 2 additional lore references and 10 complete sentences (I’ll include a list of wiki pages you can use)
  • You should brush up on how the Kingdom and the religion are called it's Urguan and the Brathmordakin
  • Your traits/quirks should be complete sentences and follow the following format.
    • At least one positive trait: (Strenght, skill, achievement)
    • At least one neutral trait: (Hobby, lesser skill, interesting fact)
    • At least one negative trait: (Weakness, Fear, Flaw)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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SoulReapingWolf

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

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But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

Your time limit expired.

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application. 

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

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