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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: when you take information from real life and pretend your character knows it
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you make your character too op to win a fight or something
    Status: Denied

Bertha grew up under the Docheblobin family. Her family held no status over other lands and clans, and were often grumpy, mean, and ill mannered.. Although she lived a savage lifestyle, she grew up believing that her family is still the most important and influential family in Atlas. Her goal is to travel around, spreading the fame of the Docheblobins through violence or peace, whichever is necessary. She takes after her parents and many siblings well, spitting rude and cruel remarks to others she meets on the road. She has massive tusks as well, making her speech very impaired. Although she is an orc, she believes herself, and all Docheblobins, to be the most beautiful and perfect race. Her curse of blood lust, just like many other orcs, has taken over her body. She is not afraid to act violent, and when she sees an elf, human, or dwarf, she is not afraid to bite.


Character Name: Bertha Docheblobin
Character Race: OLOG
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A very hideous monster-like creature. Sort of like Fiona from Shrek but a little uglier.I am very fat and short and considered by humans to be ugly
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Your biography lacks any lore references, you'll need at least 1!

The character description should only describe your character's physical appearance. Their skin.

Because you are a guest, you are unable to edit the mistakes i pointed out above. I recommend you apply as a forum user next time.

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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