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EXTREME989

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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is when you play your character with knowledge that they wouldn't have
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is when you ignore story elements and try maximize something to help you become better
    Status: Denied

Jo's dad was a Cave Dwarf and his mother was a Forest Dwarf but he looks more like a Forest Dwarf with a lighter tan. His parents were both quiet tall. So when Jo was young he lived in a small farm away from many populated areas with his parents. He had no brothers or sisters so was usually very lonely and he found it fun to go out into the forest and try light small fires. His dad owned a small wheat farm, he used this to make bread and he had cleared a big patch of grass that he used to make his hay. One day Jo's dad was collecting hay to bring into the horses and he couldn't carry it all so he asked his wife to help him, they were packing the hay into the stable when Jo came running in with a stick that was on fire. Jo was always proud when he made a fire and sometimes showed his dad, this time he had found a piece of fence that was painted blue. When he started a fire on it, it had a tinge of blue. When he entered the the stable he waved his fence with fire on it to catch his dads attention. The horses in the stables started getting frightened and started kicking their legs. Jo got scared and drop the piece of fence and ran away. The fence instantly ignited the hay on fire and in seconds nearly the whole entrance to the stable was on fire. Jo turned back realizing his mistake to late. He screamed to his mum and dad but all he got back was coughs and splutters from his parents. He tried to go into the stable but the heat was too much. The stable roof started to make a groaning noise and then suddenly collapsed in on top of where his parents were. At that moment he realized he had just killed his parents. He couldn't believe it. He turned his back and ran and ran until he couldn't anymore. He tried to start a new life and put his old life behind him. Though he did think that somehow if his parents were killed by fire that somehow fire could bring them back. That's how he became a pyromaniac. He lives a simple life and usally doesn't talk about his past with anyone

Character Name: Jo Dravus
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: Jo has light brown hair and a beard. He is quite tall for a dwarf so looks more like a medium sized elf. He walks with a slouched. He has blue eyes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your powergame definition needs some refining, please feel free to reference the power emoting page on our WIKI

Please include some server lore in your biography, such as his initial place of living or perhaps some political ties, once again feel free to consult the WIKI

Perhaps consider changing your interesting facts to things not explicitly stated in the biography, though this isn't required.

 

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