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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information gained out of character in character situations and conversations such as someones name when you don't know them in character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing ones actions onto another, such as killing someone, stealing their stuff and getting away successfully without any sort of fight.
    Status: Denied

The Life of Kana Moon

Kana Moon was born into the Moons as the second child. Along with many other siblings that have contact with her, such as Takabane Moon, her older brother. She was also born with heterochromia, thankfully she had no side effects from it except for her blue-yellow eyes which scared the locals.

As soon as she was able to walk, her father began to teach her sign language, learning faster than most in at age 1. Locals would say that she was a child sent from hell due to her muteness and abnormal eyes. This caused her to go off on a deep end of anxiety, not for long because her brother helped her through it before it got worse.

 

Just like her brother, she also was taught between the ages of 1-6 on how to defend herself by her father. She would be given a stick at age 5 by him and told to mimic it like a katana, often battling her father and often besting him as the years passed.At age 7, she was given a real katana, always making mistakes but eventually as she got older, she made strange but successful techniques that she later explained to her father.

 

Whilst learning how to use a katana, she also taught herself hand-to-hand combat, knowing that she may not always have access to a weapon. She also was taught ranged combat, learning with a bow and hitting the target with alarming accuracy. Impressing her father and brother at age 10.

 

Since she was a girl, her father had planned to marry her off to some oafish butcher's boy. Kana, opposed to this ridiculous idea, threatened to run away, her father locked her in her room and barred the windows so she couldn't escape from her room or their town which was called Halsworthy. The wedding was called off but she still retained the white dress which was remarkably simple and accented with gold.

 

Kana, wandering around the market one day, weeks after her parents had passed finally met her older brother, Takabane Moon, and the rest of her siblings. They all continued to live their lives without their parents.

 


Character Name: Kana Moon
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: You would see a Female wearing a simple white dress.She'd have light brown hair and heterochromia blue-yellow eyes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

The application is well written, but the heterochromia eyes are too much and the skin just looks wonky. This will need to be changed in the eye department.

 

If you had applied as a forum user you would've been put on pending, although you did not. This is why we recommend you apply with a forum account,

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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