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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Cobra#9967
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when people give out information whilst not in character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: This is when people take advantage of emotes and forces them onto other characters. This makes it unfair to other players.
    Status: Denied

Astonished by tis marvelous city I feel a sort of sad, this is so far from my home. I look up to the very tidy man and respond "Adventure." He looks at me as if he awaits more, "I want to learn something, I want to figure out things on my own, ignore the propaganda that has been put into our books and I wish to write my own stories. Adventure is al I ask, and a friendly stay."

Character Name: Astrid Banes
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Astrid has fiery ginger hair with tight curls often left untamed, gold eyes and brown freckles. 5'4 and skinny with a little chub. olive skin.
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Your application is on its way to being acceptable, but it needs a few changes before it can be accepted. You have 24 hours to make these changes. If you need any help or have questions, comments, or concerns, you can PM me in-game @ LuLuuLuu, here on the forums, or on Discord @ Sunny!#0017.

 

1. Your metagaming definition is incorrect. Feel free to check out our wiki page on metagaming & powergaming to help you fix this. I suggest including an example, though it isn't strictly required.

2. Your character biography must include at least 1 lore reference. This can be a settlement name, religious lore, a historical event, et cetera. Below I have linked some wiki pages that might help you.

3. Your character's personality traits should be a little more expansive than "likes animals." Additionally, your character can't have magical influence upon them from the outset, that would need to be acquired in RP.

4. Your characters wants/what drives them should be at least 2 seconds long.

 

Helpful Links:

Metagaming Wiki Page: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

Main Wiki Page: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

Nations and Charters Wiki Page: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

Races Wiki Page: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

Almaris Wiki Page: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

LotC Discord: https://discord.gg/cdbbeJ4

New Player Hub Forum Post: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming  needs a little bit of work and you need to use examples. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

 https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 


 

  • Your Character Biography did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 1 lore references and 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
 

  •  Your character's personality traits should be a little more expansive than "likes animals." Additionally, your character can't have magical influence upon them from the outset, that would need to be acquired in RP.
     

  •  Your characters wants/what drives them should be at least 2 seconds long.
     

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! 

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    Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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