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By Ilmagico

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Ilmagico#4375
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: "Well, we must be about to fight the big boss because we just found a bunch of health potions and a place to take a quick rest."
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: An Mary Sue archetype
    Status: Denied

He was born and grew up in a broken family in a merchant town, he lived free of trouble until he was about 10 years old, but at that point things changed.

He lost his family in a brutal war and was rejected by all. While persued by the authority he had to survive in a unkind world. But with his talents and wisdom, he managed to keep ahead of the curve and escape hell. This has turned him into the man he is today.

Still plagued by the past, he now works as a mercenary.

he'll never be able to fully let go of the past. But he hopes to gather enough money to start life anew and find the peace he so desperately craves, 

 

(p.s: sorry if it's a bit simplistic, but i'm new to this and it's late.) 

Character Name: Azazéal
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Length: 1,83M, Skin color: White, Hair Color: Black, eye colour: Sea Blue, Body-Build: Muscular and athletic, he has no preferences to what he wears.
Roleplay Scenario:

My thirst. The nearest inn, where is it? 

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Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.

 

You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

  • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming

  • Your backstory requires at least ten sentences and at least two direct lore references. The name of the realm is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.

  • Your roleplay response needs an action, not just dialogue. You may use the example to figure out how to format your response.

 

Make sure to check out the New Player Guide, and when you have made the changes,

feel free to contact me through discord at @mightbepan#9864 or shoot me a PM over the forums.

 If you require further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

in our Discord.

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to not fixing your persona’s backstory and other application issues, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming

  • Your backstory requires at least ten sentences and at least two direct lore references. The name of the realm is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.

  • Your roleplay response needs an action, not just dialogue. You may use the example to figure out how to format your response.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @TreeSmoothie#2018, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: 

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