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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you give your character your own knowledge when they didnt obtain it in rp
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you change roleplay or situations to benefit you and your character, basically gaining "power" when you shouldnt have.
    Status: Denied

I was born in Axios in 1609 to Axer and Maartor. 

 

During 1637 I joined the group led by Cannion I to take control over the Holy Orenian Empire. After successfully doing so I was scammed and only payed a quater of what was offered. I left the Cannion Side to leave. However i was stopped by The Kingdom of Norland who offered me more money to join their side. I obliged and help them attack the empire once again, leading in a victory in Norland’s Hands. They payed me a generous sum before I settled down in  Vjorhelm. Around the corner in 1640 the Third Crusade war was in place, and I was in no shape to fight, so I fled the area, watching my town and home burn down to the ground. 

 

Now I wonder around to different cities looking for a job.


Character Name: Axor
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 32
Physical Description: Axor is a mischieveous character that is pursuaded by riches and power. Loyalty is only present when a certain criteria is met (Money).
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Your powergaming and metagaming definitions are a little short, please expand upon these and add an example for each ❤️ here are the links to the definitions, please make sure to write the definitions in your own words, though, and not to plagiarise!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

- I’m afraid your character bio is pretty outdated,, the current map is Arcas, the current year is 1721, meaning a character 32 years old would have been born in 1689, during Atlas. Unfortunately, this means that pretty much all of your bio needs to be rewritten, the lore references replaced.. ;;; So, just a reminder, when writing your new bio make sure to include two lore references, 6-7 sentences forming a paragraph, and some info about your character and their backstory! ❤️ you will definitely find the wiki helpful with this, especially the sections on Atlas, and mostly, Arcas.

WIKI

- Your character description should mainly be a description of their physical characteristics, I’m afraid,, for example, hair colour, eye colour, height, etc. ❤️

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed in the Pending message above! ❤️

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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