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Marcus Vult
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when someone uses his out-of-character knowledge of something pertaining to the rp, and changing the way his character acts accordingly.
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Marcus Vult was born an only child to two peasants, Mary and Ben Vult.  They were very poor but Marcus loved to watch the knights ride out of the local castle to defend the land.  He dreamed of someday becoming one of the holy knights and purging heretics from the land.  One day the duke who lived in the castle called for all eligible men to come to the castle and try out for knighthood; Marcus had been waiting his whole life for this!  When he started training it was clear, this boy was a natural at swordplay.  Marcus soon climbed the ranks of knighthood and rose to the forefront of his battalion and headed the battles.  They were a mighty crew, purging heretics and slaying sacarens from the land without remorse.  But Marcus got too hasty, and ended up killing a woman and her baby in her arms.  The castle never trained him for this.  He was distraught.  When his superiors found out about the deed he had done, they banished him from the land never to return.  He traveled countless miles across mountains and plains.  But in the horizon he found a land where no one would know of the thing he had done.  A place where he could call home, and maybe even get a second chance at knighthood.


Character Name: Marcus Vult
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Marcus is a Crusader from a far off land. Dressed in crusader garb, brown eyes, brown hair, fairly muscular, 6' 4", 230 pounds.
Roleplay Scenario:

"I do not seek wealth or anything of that kind sir.  But marry, I come to find a new sense of purpose in this fine land of yours."  *He bows to the gentleman and proceeds to stroll into the throng of pedestrians, neck seemingly spinning to take in all the scenery*

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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

For reasons such as:

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Ø Your biography lacked two sufficient lore references (Settlement names, creature names (creatures that are unique to LOTC not your generic dragon or trolls), other major events that are explained in depth), however races, and continents, nations names and vaguely conveyed facts are not sufficient lore reasons. Make sure these match up with your age and the current server year of 1807. Some places you can look for references are, you can also PM on disc and I can help find more than the listed here:



Ø You cannot be a "Knight" in your biography, as a Knight is a form of Nobility. Please change this in your next revision. As well, the Holy Roman Empire - along with any other historical domains do not exist in LOTC, as we have our own - refer to the Wiki links above.

Ø Your appearance does not match up with LOTC standards, we require this to ensure quality rp. If you’re having trouble with this check out the skin archive found here!

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide here will also help you

 You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

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