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insanityqueen99
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: insanityqueen99 #5626
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its a realy immersive rpg genre
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its like sword art online
    Status: Denied

she has black hair, green and blue eyes, shes 6 feet tall, she wears a bandanna to cover her eyes, shes very busty, pale skin and very much so timid


Character Name: machi tachibana
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: shes a yandere, gets obsessed easily, loves sword and bows. sorry i cant come up with more info.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

 

  • Your definitions on Metagaming & Powergaming are alright, however, I suggest using examples to show understanding of the concepts. The following link can help you out.
  • Your Biography a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with at least a couple more complete sentences (7) and including at least two more lore mentions. The following links can help you with the latter. This is a space for you to write the origin/history of your character.
  • I suggest expanding your description a bit, how do his features look like? How is he usually dressed? Your skin needs a bit of work please browse through our skin archive to find one that is more appropriate.
  • Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format
    • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
    • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
    • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

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But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

You’ve reached your time limit.

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

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