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Isura

By Isura

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: strategy gaming
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: role-playing games
    Status: Denied

Evolt grew up near the village. An orphan living on its own after his parents got killed in the accident. 

He's fairly educated and quite person. Has a tendency saying "Ciao" as goodbye.

After he met Audrey, an adventurer that told him stories of adventures and such, Evolt got curious about seeking fame and fortune.

At the age of 15, he decided train his skill in the wild to get strong enough to explore the world.

He met the Audrey again and decided asks Audrey to make him his student, which Audrey accepts him.

Now in his twenties, he strong enough to go an adventure on its own and ready for whatever awaits him.

 

Character Name: Evolt
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: A young man in the early twenties, black hair and brown eyes. Always wearing a cap that his late parents gave it to him.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Ada

Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦  Please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example that will complement the definitions.

 

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well.

 

✦ Your interesting facts seems lackluster at best, it doesn't really offer us interesting facts about the character and what weaknesses he might have or any other interesting facts other than his combat abilities against a certain type of combat

 

✦ Your skin doesn't seem appropriate with LoTC standards, perhaps you could look through our skin archive for temporarily skins before you're able to acquire a more personal skin.

 

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

 

 

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Ada

 

Your application has unfortunately been...

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Your time has expired, you may re-apply immediately.  

Please do refer to the other post above for the following changes you need to do before your application can finally be accepted.

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