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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: when you say you know something but u dont
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: when your more powerful than you can be
    Status: Denied

Brody grew up in the woods of the Dominion of Malin with his mother and dad and brother, but when the bandit raided his home they died. he is very sad and wants to be a warrior now to kill all bandits. often time at night he says "i will kill all the bandits for my mom". he hates dark elves. he worked out in the barracks so hard that he can now kill bandits. he is now 20 and wants to be a gard. he also knows how to fish.


Character Name: Brody Blak
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Brody is very muscular and he is very fit. his hair is often spiked up and his eyes are blue like the sea. he has long ears.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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I'm afraid I have to deny your app since this is a guest account and therefore you cannot make edits to the application. If you were registered, I would've been able to set it to pending while you made the sufficient changes. But don't worry! You may re-apply again after making the following changes:

- Your definition of metagaming is incorrect, please ensure that it is corrected in your next application. You may look up the definitions in google or from our wiki, but be warned that plagiarism (Copy-pasting) isn’t allowed. You must write it in your own words, or it will result in an immediate denial. Lord of the Craft's wiki link for the definitions & lore: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

- Your definition of powergaming is somewhat correct, but I advise you to adjust your wording for clarification. You could also add an example.

- No offense meant, but I advise you to double check the wordings and punctuation in your biography for next time, and work to improve the background story as well. Many might see it as a little bit generic and lacking sufficient details, or good writing. Just a suggestion!

 

 

Apart from these, you are set! If you have any questions, feel free to message me on the forums, ingame (By typing /msg Boruto) or on Discord @Callisto#6280

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