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JackInTheBux

JackInTheBux

By JackInTheBux

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: El BlueEye#9240
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Play the role of a fictional character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Do something you couldn't do in real life
    Status: Denied

Andrés Salazar was born into a poor family. living in a cabin in a very cold place.

When he was 6 years old, his parents died being attacked by a polar bear, leaving him alone with his uncle.

His uncle (also poor) raised him all his adolescence teaching him how to survive in this world.

When he was 19 years old, his uncle unfortunately died of a rare disease.

From the age of 19, he have worked very hard to survive.

He is currently a builder and is 23 years old.

Character Name: Andres Salazar
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: I am a tall person (I measure 1.93). I am white with red hair and I am very thin (Weight 130 pounds).
Roleplay Scenario:

I came here to see all the shops that this beautiful city has to offer. I am also a lover of adventure and knowing new places.

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions aren’t quite right. You can check this page for reference.

- Your character biography is lacking a lore reference. You can find our wiki here, as well as pages for Nations and charters, and our current map, Almaris.

- Your character’s physical description should be in third person.

- Your character’s personality traits / quirks should be in third person.

- Your character fear should be at least two sentences long.

- Your roleplay scenario should be at least 4 sentences long and include both dialogue between quotes (“) as well as actions. It should be written in third person and only control your own character.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ N¡ck#4884 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Polysemic to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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