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Atticus
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Knowing something without someone telling you in character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Having an OP character to further their own development in the story.
    Status: Denied

Atticus was simply raised on a farm by his grandparents after his parents were killed in a raid from an opposing faction. Once his grandparents passed away, Atticus fled to a life of being a mercenary, risking his life to put food on the table and have a roof over his head. He travels the lands in search of adventure and wealth.


Character Name: Atticus Grift
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Atticus is a well built caucasian male with dark hair. He has no scars (as of yet).
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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As you can can see, you are almost done! I just need you to change a few things

 

1 your definitions of Power and Metagaming seem to be either incorrect or vague, please rewrite them!

here are a few links to help but don’t plagariaze them!

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

 

2 your biography should be longer and should at least contain 2 referrals to lore. These can be nations, events or history.

check out the wiki link at the end for the lotc wikia ?

 

 


 

If you need any more assistance you can contact me on the forums, through discord or in-game! My discord is (chaos#7283) and if you find me on the server, you can simply do /msg chaosgamer_. I strongly suggest joining the new player discord as well in case you need assistance or advice from other players or staff members → https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

I also recommend you looking over the wiki so you can find good lore to include in your application ?

 

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