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Jay_Jay_Jamie

By Jay_Jay_Jamie

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Not staying in character and being aware of things your character should not be aware of.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Unfairly performing an act to a point where your character becomes overpowered.
    Status: Denied

Born in the suburbs of halsworthy, his parents were neglecting and harsh to both Marco and his brother Bruno. Their father left when they were 5 and so they had to live a life of poverty and failure surrounded by that of far more superior and intellectual species and people like the elves and the heartlanders. Their mother wasn't keen on education and insisted they worked in her bakery to keep up the family business. The bakery was all they had yet on one fatefull night a group of  orcs raided the town and burned down their bakery. Defending the shop, Marco and Bruno's mother perished amongst the flames of her life's work. Forced away by the memories of their mother, both brothers moved out to Holm in search of their long lost father. After many careers failed and without the support of their parents or any other people, both of them turned to a life of crime and imports of illegal minerals. After gaining some money, they expanded their business and eventually began to form an organisation by taking on more unguided travellers to create Atlas' first Mafia. Still looking for their abandoning father to make him pay his debts for leaving them all those years ago.

Character Name: Marco Giovanni
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 38
Physical Description: With a sly grin and eyebrows as sharp as a blade, his devilish handsomeness and dark personality strikes fear in the minds of his enemies.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Zacho

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Hi! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Although there are some changes you need to make, so don’t worry!

 

'Empire of the underworld' Isn't an established thing, and lacks context and sense in your biography. However that fits is mainly what needs to connect. Please change this and contact me.

 

Make sure you do them within 24 hours, or the app will be denied unless i am contacted!

 

Whenever you are done, or have any questions.  feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message ZachsSlayer! If i’m not around there, add me on discord at Zach#5794.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

While you wait, you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

New Application Made.

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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