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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is getting into your own character. Talking about the character in the first person
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is forcing a character to perform an action using words.
    Status: Denied

As a child, Nefael grew up in the urban glamor of Minas Tirith. His parents were traders at a nearby bazaar. They were stabbed and robbed before his eyes when he was 9 years old. A homeless child who is tangled under the feet of the natives does not arouse sympathy, which is why the little boy was left to himself, depending on the grace of the passers-by. Already at such a young age Nefael experienced hunger, violence and human insensitivity. However, one day, asking passersby for food, he met an old man who passed an orphan and threw him under the feet of 15 pieces of silver. The old man's face, however, did not show any compassion or any other emotions. The old man's gesture, however, did not go unnoticed. 9 years old with a pouch full of silver is an easy booty for town looters. Nefael, unsuspecting, immediately set off for the bazaar to buy something to eat. 5 coins for one apple seemed a good price to the boy, but in reality he was cheated by a fruit trader who, on the ignorance of the boy, got rich by a one-day slogan. Night was approaching, and Nefael, seeking refuge as usual in the nooks and crannies of the streets of the big city, was being watched. The boy walked faster and faster, not even knowing where he was going, because he had nowhere to run. Turning around the corner of one of the buildings, he appeared to be a figure of a tall, masked man. His naked torso was decorated with tattoos that looked like the face of a demon who looked straight into the boy's eyes. Nefael was petrified with fear, he did not know what a mysterious character wanted him. Suddenly, the same old man emerged from behind the man who gave the boy silver pieces. The old man asked in a hoarse voice, "Nefael, do not you ever feel fear again?" The little boy was confused and scared to death, he felt he could not refuse. Without a word, he nodded, nodded. The old man replied, "Come with me." The next day, the boy was gone, there was no more orphan around the legs, begging passers-by for a piece of bread. As if it melted in the air.
Twenty years later, a mysterious man came to the city. His pale snow-like complexion mistakenly suggested that he did not come from the area. The man on the way, passing through the bazaar, stopped at a fruit merchant. Moments he thought about his choice, then he took one apple before the old merchant could reach the word, the man replied, "I know the price," and then he threw 5 pieces of silver on the merchant's counter. The puzzled old man was speechless. A moment later, with astonished eyes, he watched the mysterious figure disappear in the crowd and that's when he remembered the boy he had seen 20 years ago.


Character Name: Nefael
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: A mysterious figure who hides a bit of darkness.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Unfortunately, your application has been;

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For the following reasons;

  • Your metagaming definition is incorrect.
  • Your character's biography is brilliant, but it needs a reference to our server's lore, Minas Tirith does not exist on LoTC, please refer to the places listed on our wiki under 'Notable Domains'.
  • Your character description needs to be a description of your characters physique, things such as stature, body type and facial features are what we're looking for.

 

Your application was denied rather than put on pending as you've used a guest account to apply, I recommend that you make a forum account in case you need to edit your application if you are going to apply again.

 

Please contact me @Hex#4689 on Discord, or go to the New Player Discord @ https://discord.gg/eySYjqw if you need help with anything.

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