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JustClary


JustClary
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information out of character to aid you in taking advantage of other players.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: is the act of doing something Thant everyone knows your character cannot do, making it unfair to other players and giving you the advantage.
    Status: Denied

Clary Morganstien, 18 years old. Artist, loner, dreamer, has trouble meeting new people but is dedicated to the friends she has. She loves exploring new areas even if it’s just to capture the area on paper. She is energetic and happy. Nothing gets her down. 


Character Name: Clary
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Big green eyes, small face, short (5’2) long red hair with loose curls with dark magic runes covering body.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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- I'd like to see your powergaming definition reworded just to make sure you know it, feel free to glance over our Wiki page on the topic but keep it into your own words. 

 

- Your character bio is much too short, we prefer at least a nice paragraph with mentions of our lore and personal events that have shaped your character's story so far. 

 

- Can you clarify what you mean by "dark magic tunes covering body"? 

 

- Your skin not only doesn't match your character description entry but also does not fit in with our lore as we do not have people with wings. Farfolk tend to have darker skin than most humans, here's a link to the Farfolk wiki page and a link to our Skin Archive so you can see what sort of skin would be more acceptable. 

 

Please use the "Edit" button upon your application to make the requested changes, you have 24 hours to do so. 

If you have questions or need assistance you may contact me, anyone with the Application Moderator tag, our server's Wandering Soul (WS) chat in game, or our New Player Discord.

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- Your character bio is still much too short, we want at least a nice paragraph with mentions of our lore and personal events that have shaped your character's story so far. Lore can be found either upon our Wiki or in the lore section of the forums.

 

- While runic markings upon your character's skin are acceptable they cannot have any form of magical effect. They need simply be normal tattoos without function. You don't need to remove them if you like having them present but I just wanted to clarify our views on applicant characters having magical knowledge or traits.

 

- Your skin now does indeed match our lore and your character's description much better but still isn't quite what we picture a Farfolk to look like. I'd recommend selecting a different race if you don't' want to darken your skin. 

 

While this application has been denied it isn't the end, after 3 hours have passed from my post you're allowed to post another application. Try to keep the points I've made here in mind and I'm sure that one will be accepted. c: 

 

Don't forget If you have questions or need assistance you may contact me, anyone with the Application Moderator tag, our server's Wandering Soul (WS) chat in game, or our New Player Discord.

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