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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is carrying out in-game decisions which your avatar is not aware of by his own experience.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when a reaction isn't allowed, and not allowing a chance for error.
    Status: Denied

Keystone Davis is a secret scientist who accidentally time travelled back in time to the medieval times. Hes now stuck in this different universe and now must live like this. 


Character Name: Keystone Davis
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Hes a modern looking boy.
He loves Adventure Time
He is a secret scientist
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Sorry to say this application is denied as you didn't make the changes that were requested :c 

 

- Your character bio is quite short, we typically ask for at least a paragraph with included mention of server lore and personal events that have helped to shape your character's story so far. A lot of our lore can be found on our Wiki or by going through the forum's lore section. Sadly time travel isn't a thing for our lore though. 

 

- Character Description typically is more for describing to us what we see when we first look at Keystone here. How tall is he? Is he overweight, underweight? What stands out about his appearance? As much as I too love Adventure Time our characters don't know about the show and for them 'modern' is still medieval fantasy setting. 

 

- While being handsome would fit fine in the description section for Interesting Facts we'd rather see personality traits, flaws, and/or skills. The other two look good! 

 

- What do you mean by "I can't change my skin"? I can assist you with finding a more lore-fitting one, we have a Skin Archive just for assisting new players find something. Sadly the skin you currently have selected doesn't fit our server. 

 

This doesn't have to be the end though! Once 3 hours have passed from my post here you're free to create a new application and try again. 

Myself and any other Application Moderator (we have the fancy pink names) will still be happy to answer any questions you may have and we really recommend you join our New Player Discord if you haven't already.

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