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KeyLime17
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: KeyLime#1447
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: basically you have to pretend certain things. you may know something irl like someones location but you cant go to them because you dont actually know they are there (character wise)
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: basically being a ******, you are supposed to like say "I try to slit ur throat" but instead say "I slit your throat" so theres like no chance.
    Status: Denied

When he was around 9 a massive goblin raid attacks the outskirts of the already impoverished village of Willow Hollow, He was scarred by a Goblin on his ear when his mother pushed him away from a blade that killed her in the process. He managed to escape the raid but ended up homeless and resorted to peddling, peddling provided little help and that's when he began pickpocketing then Purse cutting and after lockpicking. he became a know thief with bounties high amongst the villages he travelled to. he fled far from the authorities to the lands around Helena of the Heartlanders and is trying to regain his honor but before he can do that, he must gain wealth in any ways necessary. He decided to instead of breaking into homes and pickpocketing he should instead hide in the brush near the roads and fine travelers or merchants to steal from. Every time there were authorities starting to patrol the areas he would flee to another county to steal in. He hopes to at one point begin searching for other halflings willing to find a greater cause along with him. He will hopefully when is renown around many of the Counties that he will start off as a mercenary band with some other peers he can find along the way.
He wishes for the Halfings to become a race that's not only known for good food. But be known as true worshippers of Knox and follow in his footsteps.


Character Name: Stephen Baordwin
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Resilient, scarred ear from Goblin raid, looks like a small human mix with a short goblin.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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As you can can see, you are almost done! I just need you to change a few things

 

1

you miss 2 lore referals in your biography. They can be nation names, history or events. in the wiki link at the end of this comment you can pick out some lore.

 

2

can you make your biography a bit longer as well?

 

3

your title as being renowned by the halflings has to be gained in roleplay. You can’t start of as an already feared man but actually work your way to that.


 

If you need any more assistance you can contact me on the forums, through discord or in-game! My discord is (chaos#7283) and if you find me on the server, you can simply do /msg chaosgamer_. I strongly suggest joining the new player discord as well in case you need assistance or advice from other players or staff members → https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 I also recommend you looking over the wiki so you can find good lore to include in your application ?

 

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