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By thefluffster

    • Rules: No
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it is when you use your irl knowledge to affect the actions of your character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: power gaming is how you maximize the effort to achieve a goal
    Status: Denied

From when Zenris was young she have always been interested in the world and was always  out exploring the area around her house.  As a child  Zenris was very active and was always running around and playing with the other children. 

when Zenris was 16 she want out to see the world. the journey was long and hard, she meet a lot of interesting people. there was a lot of people that could use magic and after awhile she got interrested in it but she could never find a place to study it. after 2 years of traveling alone she got attacked by a bear outside Santegia , she ran as fast as she could but it caught  up to her,  then suddenly a  team of 5 adventures came to her rescue.  after she got rescued she joined the fellowship.

Character Name: Zenris
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: brown hair with blue pants
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Although your application has promising parts of it, I would like to see some sly changes to certain pieces of the application. Specially within; Your definitions of metagame/powergame and a aspect of your biography. I'll go into depth below.

 

Your definitions for metagaming/powergaming are a bit lacking, i'll prefer if you can expand on this so we can have a brighter understanding if you actually know these definitions in-and-out. You can find an expanded range across all media of the internet, or scour through our own wiki which explains it here; http://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/ . 

 

Second your biography, although you do meet the requirements listed, I do wish you could add a bit more flavour through your biography, it does seem a bit lacking in character development which can be brought up easily. If you find this too hard however you can message me on the forums for some extra assistance or go onto the new player discord and they will be able to assist you here: https://discord.gg/uCwe7rv

If context, my discord ID is here: ttwesten#9293 if you find it easier to message me. 

 

Thank you for applying and I do hope you can fix the application up within 24 hours for when i'll review the application next. If you want a faster review, please don't fret to message me.

 

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