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Kymexar

By Kymexar

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Kulmexar the endless#0678
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: when games are played within a gaming platform
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When a character is too strong or when a player is high level and is picking on lower level palyers
    Status: Denied

Ky’mex's family history is a forbidden love story it started with His mother (a Human Guard) when ky'mex's mother was sent to the outskirts of the city for a disturbance  in the forest. His father was found using magic spirits whirl round him screaming violently, his mother tried to speak with the man but was shortly thrown back by the ring of spirits, his mother tried charging him going through the opening giving a single strike to the man's neck, making him go unconscious he be taken to the kingdom for questioning, in the questioning ky'mex's father was tortured till he spoke, when he spoke of what he was doing the king found it interesting asking what he wanted to accomplish, his father told the king he wanted to raise his murdered sister who was killed by a bandit raid, for bringing fear to the small town he'd be put in jail, they decided to keep him quiet by binding his mouth when not eating or needing to drink. after he was freed for being a model prisoner, he'd by taken back home by the guard, his leaving words to the guard were "your family will disown you for a crime you didn't mean to commit".  in the later years the guard and the mage grew closer and closer learning more about each other to the disgusted looks of passersby, this story ends with the death of the mage.

Leaving the human guard with a set of twins one hybrid child and a more human looking child: the one child was born a few days earlier than his twin, the first twin was born with pale skin and twin colour eyes the second twin had pure blue eyes. the first twin was named ky'mex a name meaning forsaken, the pure twin was named Barclay after the guard's father.


As the explanation above says Ky'mex's bloodline is seen as forbidden to the dark elves. With being half human his skin is slightly paler than a dark elf along with this pale skin His physical features are taller and leaner than the pure elf with short deep black hair and a sharp jawline, this larger height does make him slight clumsy. His facial main features is heterochromia a less noticeable feature of ky'mex is his smile shows slightly misaligned teeth. 

With his dark elf blood, he has good skills in magic such as necromancy, with this connection to his father, he'll sometimes hear the ghostly voice of his father, with the gravity of his past he seen as  a reluctant warrior not wishing to kill

Character Name: Ky'mex Sel'nol
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: |Rather Tall| Has A runic necklace| outcasted for his 'Impure' features|
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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SoulReapingWolf

Changed Status to Under Review

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

 

  • Your definitions on Metagaming & Powergaming are alright, however, I suggest using examples to show understanding of the concepts. The following link can help you out.
  • Your Biography a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with at least a couple more complete sentences (7) and including at least two more lore mentions. The following links can help you with the latter. This is a space for you to write the origin/history of your character.
  • I suggest expanding your description a bit, how do his features look like? How is he usually dressed?
  • Your skin doesn’t fit your race so well I invite you to look through our skin archive for a more fitting one.
  • Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format
    • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
    • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
    • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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SoulReapingWolf

Your definitions are still lacking precision and your interesting facts should be complete sentences.

Barclay is a family name, if you are planning on using it you need to have written permission from a member of their family

You can’t have magical skills 
Your description is still lacking and you are still missing lore references. 

  • Your definitions on Metagaming & Powergaming are alright, however, I suggest using examples to show understanding of the concepts. The following link can help you out.
  • Your Biography a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with at least a couple more complete sentences (7) and including at least two more lore mentions. The following links can help you with the latter. This is a space for you to write the origin/history of your character.
  • I suggest expanding your description a bit, how do his features look like? How is he usually dressed?
  • Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format
    • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
    • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
    • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)
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SoulReapingWolf

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

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But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

You’ve reached your time limit.

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

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