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Millart

By Millart

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Millart#3355
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when one uses information in an roleplaying game that has not been acquired from the character in game, but from the player outside the roleplaying scenario .
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is the act of giving your character more power than it actually has. For example, having your human character fly when the character never had the ability to do so.
    Status: Denied

Jasan Jora appeared on cold winter morning in a pumpkin field. He had nothing but his purple shirt, dark pants, broken shoes and a light blue Cristal with his name carved in it, no one was nearby when he woke up. Wondering why he is translucent he started walking towards the nearest farmers village, The village's name was "Ager" There, he met a nice human family that let him stay in their lovely home as long as he worked in the fields and help out around the house. There he learned the ways of the farmers and found his passion of making bread and pastries. After years of working with them for many years, the family died from the terrible plague but he was untouched by its affects. After the Holy Orenian Empire took greater control of the land, Jassan had to escape and find a new place to live. Now Jassan is on his way to the Kingdom of Sutica where he could set up a bakery as he finds who is is.

Character Name: Jasan Jora
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Jasan is an Elven ghost, he has a semi transparent skin with a light blue tint, platinum blonde hair and he has dark blue scars in both of his arms.
Roleplay Scenario:

Hello fine gentleman,I replied, I am here to seek a place where I could set up shop, a bakery might I add. Everyone loves a warm baguette in the mourning. :D  Might you know the local where I could do so? I asked with a charm to my voice as he brings me to the town hall where I will apply for citizenship.

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your roleplay scenario response is a bit off. It should be in third person with at least one action and one bit of dialog. (Dialog within quotes. "Example.")

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message AudryTheOddity! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at AudTheOdd#1560

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below ♥

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ AudTheOdd#1560]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message AudryTheOddity to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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