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    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Knowing something outside of rp, and playing it off as if your oc knows it too.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing an action upon someone, not giving them time to react.
    Status: Denied

Mugen was born into an extremely hard working family
though they were on the poor side of the nation, they still had enough money to put food on the table. However, one day this all came crashing down into a pitiful end. Thieves burst into their home, ransacking their food, their savings even! They no longer could pay for their house, and were soon kick out onto the streets. This caused Raiju's Parents to become very Ill, Raiju at the time only being, 7, his parents abandoned him, leaving him with a wooden sword. Raiju began to roam the streets, being abused by many of the other citizens, until one day an old samurai, took Raiju under his wing, and trained him. Now 12 years later both his parents killed for trying to steal food, and his Master dead from an illness, Raiju has no place to go. The only person he looks up to is himself, that's what his master had taught him. He wields a Double-edged Tsurugi with two-prong hilt, but don't think he's useless without a sword, he excels in close quarters. Raiju loves Food, booze, pretty women, fighting and winning, and of course he dislikes work and loosing. The marks on his arms and legs also indicate that he has been in prison before. 

His Attire: 

Mugen has messy black hair and a faint beard. His clothing is anachronistic as well, reminiscent of baggy hip-hop fashions of today. His attire consists of a light grey shirt with a stitch pattern running down the middle and ending at the halfway point of the shirt. He wears this under a red short-sleeve happi that functions as a jacket. He wears dark gray hakama cut off at shorts-length, resembling loose-fitting Bermuda shorts and Japanese Geta (wooden sandals) on his feet. these geta are fitted with several metal strips on the soles, allowing him to use his sandals as blocking devices. He has two blue ring tattoos, two on each wrist and two just above the ankles. Lastly, he carries his sword on his back with a sash that goes from his left shoulder to his right hip, favoring his right hand. It has a zig-zag pattern of green and yellowish-brown.

 


Character Name: Mugen Canales
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Will be explained in Biography, my explination is way too long for this.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has been....

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-Unfortunately because you have made your application under a guest account I cannot place you on pending as you will not be able to edit your application. As I see you have a forum account please re-upload your application on your forum account with the following changes.

 

-Please refine your character's biography to include one piece of server lore. This can be done by adding a lore approved region or lore approved event. 

 

-Please refine your character's description and attire. Your character does not fit our server's timeline. Currently our maps take place in the 1600s and your character's appearance is much too modern. If you need help being able to view a more appropriate skin please check this link here:

 

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/161821-the-lotc-skin-archive/

 

 

-Please refine your character's three interesting facts to reflect upon his strengths and weaknesses. If he likes to fight why? Does this strengthen him in his journey or weaken him? 

 

-Also not a problem just a side note your application has two names within it, Mugen and Raiju, just want to make sure there is something I am not missing and that these are both the same character correct?

 

-If you need any help please feel free to message me on the forums, leave a comment here, or message me on discord BritBritt#1506 (second brit has second t), you have 24 hours to make these changes.

 

-You may reapply in 3 hours. 

 

 

 

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