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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its where someone uses a real life action
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: where someone aims for one goal
    Status: Denied

dark elves are more sinister then a high elves they are counterpart to the high elves and they are also known for their  aggression,deceit, and stealth they are 

brutal and cruel they have a little mercy with  cheating,battling, dealing with the life of another being. They do have a  little respect for even their own kind, they do 

at times rage a war with there own kind.they love dark places and shadows they do not come in the light  unless they need to 

there  weakness  are  heat,rain,nettles,.


Character Name: Akasuki
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 800
Physical Description: you would see a sad and depressed elf who just wants to be left alone but really wants a friend that and she can get mad easy and is really shy.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has been:

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As you applied with a guest account, you sadly cannot be put on pending where you would be given 24 hours to edit/fix your application.

 

Feel free to re-apply right away!


What you need to fix to your next application:

 Your definitions could use some work. Perhaps try to answer them with little more words or put out examples of each case.

 Your biography is supposed to tell of your character, not of the race. It can be of their past, family, future plans and so on! Also copy pasting text is not allowed.

 Your biography lacks the required AT least one server lore reference.

 Your character is VERY old which would mean she would need to have a lot of knowledge on things. I would lower the age. (50 in elven years is around 18 for human)

 Character description is only supposed to tell us what she looks like. Hair color and so on!

 Your skin isn't suitable for a dark elf. Dark elves usually have a darker shade of gray colored skin. 

 

You can find the server lore and more from the Wiki Remember to type everything by your own words!
I also recommend you to join up in The New Player Discord !

Would also suggest that you make an account before re-applying! It will make the applying process much easier!

 
If you have any questions or if you are in need of assistance, feel free to contact me at all times here on the forums, via discord: Ali#0878 or in-game. My username is MyLittleUnicorn

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