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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when a player uses knowledge that their roleplay character does not have.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you do an action that directly affects another player. (I slapped so and so and their cheek turned red)
    Status: Denied

Aias was born as a human, (In the year 120 in the Kingdom of Santegia) His mother died when she gave birth to him, and his father was an abusive drunk. He worked as a farm boy into adulthood with no help. But later in his life he was sent to fight alongside the snow elves against the dark elves. He was gifted with strategy and courage which benefited him greatly in the war. He out shined both man and elf. He came face to face with the leader of the dark elves, however war had aged him beyond his years and left him weary and in need of rest. He and the dark elf leader fought from dawn to dusk, Aias was on the verge of death, but Wyrvun took pity upon him and transformed Aias's human soul and body into the likeness of the snow elves. With this transformation Aias had the power to slay the dark elf leader and end the war. Aias was rewarded with the responsibility of the Grand Prince as the previous Grand Prince felt as if it was his duty to step down from the throne as Aias had proven himself worthy to be prince. Aias was praised in all cities, mostly in the city of Lindale. From that moment forward he made an oath that he would protect The Princedom of Fenn till the end of the last age of time. Currently Aias resides in the structure of Axios, reigning with an iron fist yet bringing peace to his citizens of the Princedom. 

Character Name: Aias Perlamin
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 250
Physical Description: 6'3". Long white hair. Pale with soft pink cheeks. Ice Blue eyes. White robes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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MickMeist

Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application has been:

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For the following reasons:

As you are a guest, you are unable to edit your application, so I must deny it rather than placing it on pending.

Your powergaming definition is incorrect, please reference our power emoting wiki page for help, but keep in mind plagiarism will result in a blacklist from applying again.

Your character can not transform to snow elf from human, pick one or the other.

If he was born in the year 120 he'd be 1400 and some years old currently, please change the date he was born to something much more modest.

He can not have any magical capabilities, be 'important' at all, and also your entire bio sounds extremely like an Anime Protagonist, and we require that your first character is more modest. Also, he did not kill the 'Dark Elf Leader' because that event never happened on the server, I advise rewriting your bio for your next app entirely.

He can not currently reside on axios, as we abandoned Axios decades ago in rp and are all currently on Atlas.

Picking the age 250 means your character has lived through things and should know things that you have no idea about personally. It would be much easier if you picked a more modest age.

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Worry not! This is not the end of the world, and you may re-apply in 3 hours.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

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