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Orm_Proudfoot
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    Discord: Saint_Ceadda#5984
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is the use of out-of-character knowledge to influence or impact in-character actions or roleplay.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is the act of behaving or roleplaying in an all-powerful, unrealistic way, forcing actions upon others that cannot be countered.
    Status: Denied

In the year 1351, Owen Sturdyfoot guided a group of halflings and priests of the True Faith during the evacuation of Aegis. While passing through the Verge, they were attacked and Oren killed. Becoming separated from the masses, the group found themselves trapped in the Verge when the portal to Asulan closed. They occupied the former site of New Oasis and lived their shortened lives in the harsh environment of the Verge. The four halfling clans intermarried over the next 12 generations and carried on the tradition of the True Faith. Besieged by the creatures of the Verge, the personality of the halflings changed over time, and they became more stoic and hardened. While most stayed behind the high walls of New Dunwood, parties were sent out periodically to search for a way out of the Verge. Finally, after being trapped for 468 years, a party discovered another portal far from New Dunwood. Braving the dangers along the way, the remaining residents ventured forth from the safety of the walls and journeyed to the new portal. Not knowing what lie beyond the swirling vortex, they took the chance and found themselves in Almaris.

 

Oren Sturdyfoot is an eleventh generation descendant of the great Owen Sturdyfoot and a senior member of Clan Sturdyfoot. Now in his 93rd year, his body is ravaged by the harsh environment of the Verge. Gaunt, with wrinkles marring his once fine features, and snow white hair adorning his head and face, the venerable halfling is weary of life and resigned to death. He accompanied the group in leaving New Dunwood at the behest of his widowed niece, Everleigh Sturdyfoot, and for the sake of his grandson, Owen, rather than from personal desire, as he was content to remain behind to die. His faded blue eyes widened in shock upon seeing blue sky and green grass for the first time after leaving the portal, sparking a tiny desire to live and see the wonder of this new world. The tall, majestic trees and distant mountains dwarfed his hunched two foot, seven inch frame, but Oren was enthralled by it all the same.

 

Educated at the church school in New Dunwood, Oren's knowledge of the world outside the Verge is very limited. In theory, he knows of trees, grass, water, and the like, but has never seen any outside of the few surviving books brought by the original halflings many centuries ago. He was born in 1726 in New Dunwood to Flynwan Sturdyfoot and Jillyse Boffin, their second son and third child. He entered the church as a young man, and trained to become a priest, as many in his family had done before him. In 1763, he married Lena Boffin, and remained together for forty years until her death in 1803. With her, the light and joy in his life died, and he retired from the priesthood. In the years since, he has compiled the history of the Verge since 1351, the desire to see it complete being the only driving force keeping him alive. He and Lena had one child, Branden Sturdyfoot, who died in 1816 while off trying to find a way out of the Verge. Branden's wife, Vayora, had predeceased him, leaving their son, Owen Sturdyfoot, an orphan. Oren's niece, Everleigh, now cares for the young Owen and her elderly uncle.

 

OOC: My friend will be submitting an application to become Everleigh Sturdyfoot, my character's niece. There will be similarities in our applications as we are using the same general background. Way back in 2011, I was a member of the server, global moderator, and chief of religious development. My Minecraft account is the same, but I changed the name several years ago and would probably need to be re-whitelisted anyway after nearly a decade away, so am reapplying. Thanks!


Character Name: Oren Sturdyfoot
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 93
Physical Description: Mid-height for a halfling, about 2 and a half feet. White hair and beard. Faded blue eyes set in a wrinkled face. Gaunt.
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

Oren was gazing in amazement at the size of the sprawling bazaar before him, pondering at the variety of goods it contains and the mass of flesh seemingly everywhere when he realized he was being spoken to by a man who had appeared before him. 

 

Frowning at the interruption, he blurted, "I beg your pardon. What do you want?"

 

The man's smile wavered, but he repeated himself. "I was simply welcoming you to our lovely city and inquiring as to your reason for being here, my friend." The man's smile widened again as he finished.

 

"My presence here is my business," Oren began, still frowning, but remembering his manners and long held faith, ended with, "but thank you for the welcome and be blessed by the Light." He inclined his head slightly to the man before pushing past him into the bazaar.

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Hey! As you can see, your app is stellar and  almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

Physical Description

 

Character Biography

 

 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Once you’ve finished or if you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message niijaro) !

Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!

 

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Hi! As you can see, your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 


 Upon further review and discussion, due to the invalid lore mentioned on your application and the story line you've made up for the application your character would be canonically deceased. If you are to apply again, please use valid lore.

 

Don’t bum out! You can submit a new application and try again right after,  just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

If you need any help or have any questions, please contact me through the forums or my discord (minty#8400) ! You may also message me in game (/message niijaro) !

Join us on the LoTC Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

You can also use /creq in game or use the #ws chat and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

If you still need help, please take a look at the Wiki!

 

 

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