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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: the1stflyingpigeon#4469
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Narrating what is happening
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: teaming
    Status: Denied

He is just done with school en tries to live on his one, he begins a small farm and buys a bunch of chickens but his farm catches fire and in a no time all that is left are 2 chickens en ashes so with no money and just 2 chickens Ares leaves his farm en comes to the city to search for a job to make money to buy a new farm

Character Name: Ares
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Yellow eyes red skin black long hair a small beard
Roleplay Scenario:

I have come here from the east to search for a job

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Carson

Hey! Unfortunately, I've had to **deny** your application for the following reasons! After you get an idea of what needs to be fixed, you can reapply for the server again at **any time**!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!
  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!
  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
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  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
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  • Your Skin is too reliant on noise shading! Please try to smooth it out!


Here's a link to your application again for easier access: 

And I would also highly suggest joining the LOTC official discord for easier access to help, for events, announcements, etc:
https://discord.com/invite/fwEQA2F

Also, if you want to find more information on the server lore, just check out the wiki on the link below!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

Finally, feel free to familiarize yourself with the New Player Hub for when you are accepted! It includes commands, and other useful things for when you are accepted!
https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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