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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: e v e l y n n#8538
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using out-of-character information about something in the rp , in the rp
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Being way too powerful (op) without giving people time to react and ignoring the effects of injuries , potions etc
    Status: Denied

Born in the 1st day of spring , Astrae grew up in a small elven village with her mother and father. Life was quite simple for them until her father had decided to leave them for another woman , after that Astrae's life became a bit harder as her father was the one who had a job and her mother was the one who took care of her. Growing up Aenwyn (her  mother) made sure that her daughter was taught the basics of life and how to protect herself. Years passed with the mother and daughter having a healthy and lovely relationship until a fire burnt her whole house and her mother while she had gone hunting , returning to the remains of her house Astrae found her mother half-alive with most of her skin in blisters and burns. With her last breath Aenwyn gave Astrae a strange shaped medallion , her bow and wished her good luck with her life. Grabbing anything she could find Astare finally left her home and started her own journey.


Character Name: Astra
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Astrae's body type is slim athletic , she is 6 ft 2 , she weights 67 kg , she has snow white hair , white eyes and pale skin.
Roleplay Scenario:

"Adventure!" Astrae responded as she gave the man  a warm smile. "Now if you'll excuse me-Oh and it was a pleasure to talk with  you!" She bid farewell and walked in to the bazaar , hoping that she can find a new bow and ask questions about the strange medallion her mother gave her.

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason that too many errors were made.

 

Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are correct, though please give an example for each so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

→  Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

Your Skin and Physical Description does not match your character’s race. High elves can't have white eyes but they can have grey!

 

Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

 

Your  Dislikes must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason please ❤️

 

Your Skin is not up to LotC standards.

 

 

If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Demon_Lilly#9033, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

 https://discord.com/invite/7sTjWYX

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