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Oxtivar
  • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: Oxtivar#6926
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Know your role. Play it be respectful.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Because metagaming takes away from the roleplaying aspect.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Oxtivar
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Frickle and flighty looking oxtivar stands a tall 5,11 for a wood elf and fall leaf skin tone and weighing 165 with greens and amber eyes gilli suit
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Yess...it is me.." I inspect the cushion before I sit down and begin my story of how Ive become a traveling wood elf who's ward is the forest. My mother and father both vanished after shaking hands with a half fiend named ikourus..the forest and and it inhabitants have cared for me and in return I take care of it

 

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Your definitions could use some expanding! Typically we look for at least a full sentence and those are unfortunately too short to accept.
  • On LotC emotes (actions) are done in third person, I.e. 'he would go to sit down' not 'I sit down'. Additionally your backstory is incredibly short, we tend to look for a small paragraph- perhaps 5-6 sentences long.



 

You have 48 hours to make these changes otherwise I will unfortunately have to deny your application. When you have finished please message me on the forums or contact me on Discord @itsjustmemorgan to let me know so I can review it!

 

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As well as this if you still need help:

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • List reason; this message is usually for Ai related things or anything that makes an application an instant deny - see checklist



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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