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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I avoid it by never forcing an action on another character. I describe my character's attempt and let the other player decide how their character reacts. It's about collaborative storytelling, not 'winning'
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It breaks the game's reality by using outside knowledge your character doesn't have, ruining surprises and giving you an unfair advantage. It prioritizes winning over storytelling
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Talanor
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: short blonde hair, avarage height, skinny but muscular, eyes green, outfit is a dark cloak with a hood
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

The candlelight dances in your weary eyes. You don't sit so much as collapse onto the cushion, the weariness of a thousand hard days settling around you. You meet her ancient gaze, your own hardened by a life without softness.

"Expecting me?" you rasp, your voice like gravel from disuse. "Hope you didn't bother setting out the good china."

You lean forward, the scent of swamp rot and old magic clinging to your worn leathers.

"The story? It's short and smells like the gutter. They call me Pannus. No family name. No house sigil. My crest is a quick hand and a faster blade."

"My childhood was a teacher of sharp lessons. How to pick a lock, pick a pocket, and which guards' patrols to pick to avoid. I learned to fight in filthy alleys for a moldy crust of bread. I didn't have a wooden sword; I learned to parry with a rusted dagger. I didn't have a father to teach me honor; the city taught me that honor won't fill your belly."

"You learn to trust the weight of a coin purse, not the word of a man. You learn that the only thing that's truly yours is the scar on your skin and the will to see the next sunrise."

You gesture around the tent, then back at her.

"So. You see a story written in scars and stolen silver. What is it you think you need from it?"

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  • Hi there! Please rewrite your character's backstory without the use of AI! You may use it for spell-checking, ideas, and other minor parts, but it may not write your application. Feel free to reuse story points and ideas from your current backstory.
  • It looks like you don’t have a skin! If you are having trouble finding one then feel free to use or take inspiration from our skin archive. → https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 


 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 48 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord, Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the New Player Guide here could help you!
 

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Due to: Time's up!

 

If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

  

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