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pheonixremi
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    Discord: phoenixfire 99 #7840
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: having your character know something from the outside world
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: doing godly actions that other players cant do anything about
    Status: Denied

"adventure thank you for asking" I say in a nice tone, I can see that you just want to get rich, and with that I turn away from him and walk down the bazaar hoping to sell some treasure I had found. i turn back to him after accouple feet and say but that is  not a bad thing unless you take your greed to far.


Character Name: deathinator
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 65
Physical Description: strong, gray hair with a brown head band, gray and blue coat and pants light blue eyes and a satchel oven his shoulder
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography states that his parents were killed by bandits, that is a character trope. It must be changed to something different but that yet still fits your character's story to your likings.

  • Your Character Biography states that he killed the entire bandit band. That is not only a power-gamed background story, but it goes against the our Policy for applications.

  • Your Character Biography states he became a well known general in the elven army. That statement goes against our Policy for applications, so you'll have to remove it.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your Roleplay Scenario must be written in third person.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ JokerLow#6666]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message JokerLow to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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