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You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

• I’d recommend re-reading the definitions of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming. Both of your definitions appear to show a somewhat lack of knowledge regarding the actual meaning of the terms. Make sure to apply your knowledge more efficiently and try to add some examples that could be representing each.
• Your Character Biography seems to have a good start, however, It is lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- While it does not include the mandatory (1) lore pieces from the LotC Wiki.
• Your Character Biography doesn’t seem to be as well established as we would like. I would recommend going and adding at least (10) complete sentences; It is required.
• Your Character's Physical Description as well could use more sentences possibly describing the height and weight of your character, et cetera.
• Your Roleplay Scenario has a great start, but It is required to include text and action.
  
  You can also join our New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns. 

Sorry! Be that as it may, your application has been denied because the 24 hour period has ended and because you didn’t follow the changes I had given once you were placed under pending. However, you are allowed to reapply immediately as long as you follow the required changes while doing so.

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] or here on my forums account.

• I’d recommend re-reading the definitions of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming. Both of your definitions appear to show a somewhat lack of knowledge regarding the actual meaning of the terms. Make sure to apply your knowledge more efficiently and try to add some examples that could be representing each.
• Your Character Biography seems to have a good start, however, It is lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- While it does not include the mandatory (1) lore pieces from the LotC Wiki.
• Your Character Biography doesn’t seem to be as well established as we would like. I would recommend going and adding at least (10) complete sentences; It is required.
• Your Character's Physical Description as well could use more sentences possibly describing the height and weight of your character, et cetera.
• Your Roleplay Scenario has a great start, but It is required to include text and action.
   

You can also join our New Player Discord If you haven’t already- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions or concerns.