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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: MetaGaming is using the information outside of a characters life and using it as a guidance and it's also extremely punishable. You can get many punishment weeks and permanent ban if it's being continued. Metagaming is also used for getting help if your b
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: PowerGamPowerGaming the simplest form it's the act of a character doing something the character realistically being unable do to. MetaGaming's a form of power-emoting which is detrimental to Roleplaying by breaking of immersion and loss for fairness of ot
    Status: Denied

Azvar Dragonslayer grew up in the underworld and he was being trained to hunt but he refused to hunt anything just wanted to be a peaceful guy and wanted nothing to do with the orcs way of doing things. Azvar Dragonslayer one of the few decedents of Krug and being a decedent of Krug was tough on him because the orcs were looking to him for guidance, aid and comfort which he didn't provide so his father had to take his place and he wasn't too happy about having to take his son's place all because he refused to lead the orcs. Azvar Dragonslayer trained in his own way he refused to be raised in the way of the orcs, he left the underworld and decided to live among the humans which wasn't easy they were discriminating against him. The rest of the orcs decided to hunt and kill humans with or without Azvar, they went to the village where he was staying Avzar got his blade out and killed the orcs one by one until the village was safe. Azvar Dragonslayer lives in a nice cabin if there's any disturbance or an attack somewhere he'll be there fighting to the death he won't stop til the job is done.

Character Name: Avzar Dragonslayer
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 16
Physical Description: Azvar DragonSlayer swordsman, Krug decedent won't fight unless necessary just don't worry he won't bite but his sword will won't til the job is done.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been:

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Plagiarism is absolutely unacceptable on LOTC. You have copy and pasted your definitions. Please write them in your own words next time you apply.

I have also gone through your application and picked out other things you will need to fix if you wish to be accepted:

 

-How did your character slay all of those orcs by himself? It seems very unlikely that he would be able to do this.

-What is this 'underworld' that your character was raised in? Please explain more.

-Please reference the lore at least one more time in your story, other than simply mentioning that your orc was a descendant of Krug. This can be done through the mention of a place, or event that has impacted your character. If you can find another way to reference the lore in your story, feel free.

-Your character must be at least 18 years of age.

 

Please fix these issues next time you apply. You may reapply in six hours.

If you plagiarize on your next application, you will receive a minimum one week ban from applying.

If you need any assistance, feel free to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

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