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Rivals2444

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: rivals2444
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: since power gaminh is hard to avoid you should prevent by encouraging not using it and focus on collaborative roleplay, prioritize character concepts over optimization
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: less immersion and creating an uneven playing field
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Alnan
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Dark hair with really blue eyes 6ft whears a very comfortable traveling suits.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

 

 “I… I don’t know why I’m here,”you say, your voice rough. “I’ve come for answers. Maybe you can help me find them?.” i say witha glance of esitation in the voice

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your character doesn’t talk about it.
  • Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person. Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll gladly help you! If not please take a look at our skin archive! → https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

My discord is @cheese1sgrater if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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