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Rugur

Rugur

By Rugur

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Eragon#6328
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is my own words is where someone take like a info from the discord then uses it but there character wouldn't be able to reguly
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is where mine is my own words are if someone makes a move that there character would not be able to do like if I just joined and said I use a sword it one slice into one piece
    Status: Denied

Rugur was born on August 1st in the city of Lareh'thilln his father name is Merci he was a scholar and his mother was mathlo he was the only child and his mother a warrior and was killed in the a war of high elfs his father raised him and he taught him more than the school did he taught him how to fight with sword and fist how to hunt and fish at 12 he made a long lasting friend a snow elf vytrek on one of his father adventures 

He tried to visit his friend as the most as he could at age 16 he started to mature and he started to date but it don't last long enough to be memorable at age 18 he started to explore the world and started to pursue a job as a scholar but always had being a warrior in the back of his mind.

 

Character Name: Rugur
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Violet eye long silver hair and tall like 6,7
Golden and sliver clothes 145 pounds kinda strong
Roleplay Scenario:

I am here for adventure but I am a high elf so do not address me in such comman manner.

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!


 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 


 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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