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Declanswift

By Declanswift

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: So im not the best reader but I think it means like using info you get out of game in game.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing actitions that are unfrair or over powered.
    Status: Denied

Grew up in a poor house hold in the holy orodian empire. His mom loved him very much but she was always working so it was hard to get attached to her. His dad died in a hunting accident when he was only 6. He had dyslexia so he struggled in school. When he was 8 he got taught how to use a bow and was very good at it. When he was 13 a tragity struck, while out at the market his mom died of a hard- attack he had nothing so he joined the army and faught in the war of two emporers as a archer. 

Character Name: Declan Swift
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Strong like 5*9 brown eyed a bit skinny black hair
Roleplay Scenario:

Declan says ïm here for some adventure and to meet new people!" the man says the best way to meet some poeple is at that pub. " Thanks mate" Declan says with a grin and he starts walking there. 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

    • https://app.grammarly.com/

    • Your roleplay scenario response is a bit off. It should be in third person.

    • Your character’s fear needs to be at least two sentences long and explain why they fear that, as well as tie into their personality traits/quirks.

    • Your character’s aspirations must be at least two sentences and tie into their bio!

    • Your skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

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Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ AudTheOdd#1560]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message AudryTheOddity to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you check out the application guide;

 New Player Application Guide - New Player - The Lord Of The Craft 

As well as read over the wiki! WIKI

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