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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Having outside information out of roleplay and act in roleplay based on the information you've gathered.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power gaming is either not giving the other player a turn to roleplay in chat, or simply overpowering them (OPing)
    Status: Denied

He is a of a strong and slim build, excellent in climbing and is very agile, he is well trained in the art of stealth as he is the colour of the darkness, He is also a great liar and seems to make a lot of friends to later exploit them, he is very intelligent and has learnt a few letters in English pronunciation such as 'A' and 'N'. He is covered in warm isolating fur coat but has the thickness of a rug. He is very self conscious and conscious of other peoples intents and can calculate a lot of situations, so he is a well trained in bush craft and can make an assortment of traps that effect different races. He was left as an orphan at birth by his father who had been separated at the Empire.

He lives day to day by using his exceeding ability's of thievery to his advantage in every situation, and often will take up corrupt deals in order to gain money. D'ahr Dracon is his twin brother and has been close to him ever since, they often share the same mindset but on the odd occasion they will disagree and it will cause fights. When we ( D'ahr and myself ) they only 15 years old while travelling to Holm they got ambushed by a group of Orc bandits, they where separated for a long time and had developed their own respective reputation, but they both remembered that they had aspired to reach Holm, so while they were travelling they crossed each other during an festival hosted by one of the Kings at the main city of Holm, they soon realised each others scent and have been together since. They now collaborate with each other to execute stealth missions for third party audiences in order to benefit themselves, are also seeking revenge for his father and still are sensitive to their mothers death who died at birth. Now, at age 26 they have both regained each others trust and are closer than ever.


Character Name: K'varr Dracon
Character Race: KHARAJYR
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: A small black figure with a fur coat, similar to a bear with a smaller build, with his snout pointed and whiskers sensing the wind.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Although there are some changes you need to make, so don’t worry!

 

Your bio lacks a proper lore reference. It is also very similar to another applicants.

Your skin is the exact same as another applicants skin, you'll need to change this unless the two are somehow identical.

One of your three interesting character facts needs to be a weakness.

Overall you need to variate from the other applicant. Note that plagiarizing will get you an automatic denial.

 

Make sure you do them within 24 hours, or the app will be denied unless i am contacted!

 

Whenever you are done, or have any questions.  feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message ZachsSlayer! If i’m not around there, add me on discord at Zach#5794.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

While you wait, you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Other app accepted, so ill just deny instead of double accepted. Have fun playing!

 

 

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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