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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Knowing your player is inside a game and such
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Not being able to die, killing 20 enemies at once, being the most powerful etc.
    Status: Denied

"Steve.", his mothers cold blue eyes stared right into his, "The Elves did it. Stop them, stop them all! You have to be strong my young one. I'm sorry I couldn't see you grow up to be a man as great as your father was." With that Steve's mother passed away. "Mother." He let out in a cry. He embraced her and sobbed. He cried but he knew even then he would never be able to get his family back. He spent the next years begging. He cared to much to steal valuables. Whenever he broke into a house he would always take food and that would be all. He spent every year until he was 17 like this, until he finally decided it was time to head his mothers dying words and take action. He broke into a house and stole a dagger, his new weapon. In addition he took much more food than normal. Adding on he found a hunting bow outside and a quiver of arrows, he took those too. He then set out for a town too join, hopefully one that would wage war against those that killed his father.

Character Name: Steve
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A short and thin small young man. Always looking to get a little extra cash. Life has been hard for him since he was born. Often resorts to thievery.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been:

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For the following reasons:

Unfortunately since you are a guest account you are unable to edit it, so I can not place it on pending.

Your definitions are both incorrect, please refine them and feel free to reference their respective pages on the wiki which I link below.

There are no direct references to our lore, this is a requirement, I suggest including the specific place he lived rather than just calling it his homeland ect.

The 'x race killed my parents' cliche is very cliche, and we try to avoid it when possible. It'd be nice if you changed that bit to something else that shaped your character

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Worry not! This is not the end of the world, and you may re-apply in 3 hours.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command.

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