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By teresa

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: ninja #7973
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: a person using stuff they know from real life that there charachter dosent
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: doing actions that charachter cant do
    Status: Denied

teresa grew up in elvenesse and had a loving family.

she always wanted to learn magic, especialy telekenisis.

since elfes dont give birth often there were no other children to play with her during her child hood.

she was always envyious of the human children with brothers and sisters.

she would spend alot of time reading about magic.

everyone said she was obsessed (the were right).

she developed no social skills because she was to busy reading about magic.

there was no-one around to talk to that was her age anyway.

she is determend to find some one willing to teacher her telekenisis.

and maby some other magic.

Character Name: Teresa
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: deceptivly youthful with below average hight and weight,grey eyes and brown hair, slim body build
Roleplay Scenario:

I step back in surprise as i see the man.

"adventure mainly" I say

hoping to end the encounter quickly I atempt to think of somthing to say

"im in a bit of a hurry" i say hoping he dosent try to strike up conversation

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord crines#2975. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Suicidium to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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