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Theluca563

Theluca563

By Theluca563

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: by reading the rules beforehand
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it ruinens the fun of finding out yourself
    Status: Denied
Character Name: luca
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: a white tall man with light brown hair his outfits can change from time to time and almost always wears a crown
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Example:well i was a farmer until my farm was attacked by goblins i tryed to defend it but it was no use. I ran until i colapsed and woke up the next day then i just started to walk i didn't know where i was. And then i arrived here

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s  definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Please define each and ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out.
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario, excluding the example paragraph! Additionally please add an example paragraphIf you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.
  • Please change your character's name to not be your username, your character should be wholly unique and not a personification of your minecraft account, feel free to get creative with it!
  • Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Please remove the crown, as you are not allowed to be royalty or nobility when you start. Please change this, and feel free to use or take inspiration from our skin archive. → https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive
  • Please fix your grammar, spelling, & punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 48 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, please refer to it when making changes. You can also join our Discord, Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the New Player Guide here could help you!
 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire) or by /msg Evonpire in-game for any questions or concerns.

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Due to: Time’s up!

 

If you believe this was denied by mistake contact me through the information below. You may make a new application whenever.

  

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