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Void_Bourn

By Void_Bourn

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: shadowwalker227_
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: by following logic and realism. example if I was sparring with a knight and he parry's my sword strike with an iron shield. The most I'd be able to do depending on how strong the items are is dent or scratch the shield. It has to follow the laws of logic and realism.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It makes the world unrealistic and too many plot holes It should be given after being found out in character. It gives some players unfair advantages they shouldn't even have as well as undermining immersion and fairness in the game. It also makes it harder for the Game Master to keep the story and world in order. in order to avoid metagaming we could just avoid out of character plannings, use only character knowledge, and embrace uncertainty.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Arvör Nörell
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 50
Physical Description: he has crimson hair and beard he is 5' and has blue eyes and Nordic tatoos and wears bronze and silver armour with an ice gem in the middle.
Roleplay Scenario:

    Arvör Nörell has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

"I was raised as a Norseman in the North even though I was a Mountain dwarf, but still I enjoyed his life. I grew up learning the art of Blacksmithing and farming so I could earn my keep and truthfully I enjoyed it. But what I loved above all else was battle. The thrill of adrenalin and how close your life comes to death was a thrill he craved. But one day my home was raided and I fell to the river bed. Floating away until I beached at a frozen shore side. When I awoke I had to make a new life and found refuge in the mountains like my ancestors before me." I said, thinking her a seer. 


"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until… 


After a while I entered a small village where I searched for work. Going to the local tavern I orders some mead and roast pork. A man in armor comes up to me and demanded. “What is your business in this small town of ours stranger? Fore I, Olaf Bjornson, guardian knight asked. ” I can remember think what an arrogant prick, but I still responded saying. “just Looking for work and coin, my good sir. Fore my home was raided five winters ago.” He then sneered at me saying “Then I suggest you leave here and go to the frozen mountains with the rest of your kind and find work amongst them, you filthy dwarf.” I honestly saw this coming so I just sighed and huffed out tiredly. “I was hoping this wouldn’t happen but fine, I am sorry for the inconvenience. I shall wish you good bye.” Then I walked away back towards the mountains.

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Frymark

Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there! 

Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

  • Your metagaming answer is on the right track, but not quite there! Try expanding your answer and give a definition of metagaming.
  • Your backstory has a splendid start and seems interesting - however, please ensure you do at least in part respond to the prompt given to you, instead of writing your entirely own situation.

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours, you will be denied.
When you are finished, please message me on Discord @Frymark to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

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JustMeMorgan

Changed Status to Under Review

 


 

Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

  • Failed to follow backstory prompt.



 

My discord is @itsjustmemorgan if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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