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wannes

By wannes

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    Discord: wannes660#6903
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: eg If the player orc 14 raiding our camp react fast
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: you be emotes inside or outside of combat
    Status: Denied

i was walking when i was 10 whit my parents and it was night and we saw wolfs i ren away so fast if i can but my parent did not make it now i live whit my white horse he was a baby horse that i found in de woods and now we are never leaveing 

Character Name: wannes
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: blue t-shirt black legs and he is blond
Roleplay Scenario:

i say i want to go on a adventure where i can profe my self en get a good time whit frends and my horse

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. 

  • our Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

  • You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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