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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    Discord: wannes660#6903
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: helping/informating people
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: a strong word for example to kill some one
    Status: Denied

i live in Healun'ur my parents got killed by wolves and i never never liked dogs again 

Character Name: Kay
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: he is blond he has red eyes he is blocked he is 1,80m he weights 60kg
Roleplay Scenario:

I'm here for one night because the next day I have to leave again I'm going on an adventure from city to city from country to country....

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WestCarolina

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!
  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!
  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!
  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!


 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki! 

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