wannes660

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

• Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

• Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

• You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

• Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/ 

As I can see from your previous applications, you are not trying at all to improve the qualities of your applications, I suggest taking a long time working on them and seeing what you need to work on.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI