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Winderlin


Karna
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Winderlin#8512
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Having knowledge that you dont have
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Saying that maybe something that you said against another player instantly happened without the other saying it did.
    Status: Denied

When he was seven, he lost eye sight. it has damaged his fighting skills but sharpened his hearing. Being A half elf, it was already good. At fourteen, his mother got sick and dad needed to get food, so he went to hunt in the Icy mountains where they lived. I went with him, and I am the only one who  came back. Wargs attacked and his father saved Winderlin from this attack by fighting them off while he ran. The body was never found. He now sees, through god, and will never run away. His mother eventually got better, and is still alive and remarried, but the Step father was abusive.  He would beat his mother and all he could do was hide under the table with his child brother, Veren. Sofia, his mother, was beaten so bad she needed medical help. The next day, His step father, Marcus Erin, got into A argument. Eventually, it got heated. he punched Winderlin, so he fought back, and eventually stabbed his Step father. As he crippled to the floor, bleeding and unable to be saved, Winderlin Prayed. He prayed for forgiveness. As he died. He soon left town as an outcast to his people at 19 because of the crime. He wandered to Arcas, and by this time, he had devoted himself to God and was A paladin. he was pure, and will not forget his bloody past. He was ready. he was devoted to Xan.


Character Name: Winderlin
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Bigger on the top side A bit, pretty strong, Wears Chain armor with some plates and A Blindfold. Eye color: Crackling Blue, 6'2, 143 pounds, Blind
Roleplay Scenario:

"My lord, *shakes hand*. I wish to spread the word of my god, to these people and fight off evil from all parts of this land."

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

  • You cannot be able to start a mage, for example a Paladin
  • Your metagaming and powergaming defintions are on the right track, but read again.
  • Your characters personality needs negative traits as well.
  • Your Roleplay scenario should be more detailed.


You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

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You failed to edit the above changes. Please remake your app with the requested changes.

 

 

If you need help with settlement / nations, a further set of links are below which can assist you here:

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides


https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

If you require further assistance, please reach out in the LoTC Discord found in the New Player Hub or Contact me on discord: Evo_#0001

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