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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta gaming is when you use knowledge you know irl to benefit your roleplay character or events
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I believe power gaming is when you try and make your character better and not give him many flaws. Making your character better than he is
    Status: Denied

Jean Earnhardt is the firstborn son of Heimlin Earnhardt, a disgraced knight from Redenford that had run foul of his liege lord's temper having forsaken his vow to serve in battle against the Empire of Renatus during the War of Two Emperors. From a young age, Jean was expected to follow in his father's footsteps and serve as a knight of the Holy Orenian Empire. However, proving himself worthy was not an easy task, as rumours of his father's actions haunted him throughout his upbringing. This only steeled his determination to better himself. He proved a quick, but stubborn learner. Preferring to learn hands-on than with his head stuffed inside hefty tomes and scrolls. He would often day dream of adventure and of exploration; seeing Redenford as too small a place to house his ambitions. This drew the ire of his father who did much to dissuade his son from venturing too far from home. Heated discussions of "duty" and "fidelity" to ones family could often be heard emanating from the home of the Earnhardt's. Jean's closest friend was his younger brother, Gregor, who Jean coveted for his advice and strength of reasoning. Whenever in doubt, Jean would find his brother, if only speak his mind to a willing ear. It was on one such night, that Jean was pondering his future, that his mother came barging through into his room exclaiming that Gregor had not returned home and that it was nearing nightfall. Jean, without a seconds hesitation in his body, jumped from his bed, sheathed a dagger into a scabbard and darted out into the auburn-lit night. For what seemed like an age, Jean raced from one street to the next, asking everyone from drunken passerby's to old spinsters if they had seen his brother. But as the night dragged on Jean's determination gave way to panic. Dark thoughts rushed through his mind and his body ran icy cold. He froze, deathly quiet, listening intently to the hum of the air and the faint cry of his name. His name!? Jean spun round and there in a crumpled mess was his brother. Half-beaten to death tucked away in a dark alleyway. Finding renewed vigor in the happiness of finding his brother, Jean managed to carry him home to his anxiously waiting mother. Their father, furious at them for bringing disrepute to the family name, especially Gregor, exiled him from their home. Jean, unable to let his brother go out into the world alone and sensing his opportunity to be rid of his familial shackles and realize his dreams of adventure made it known his intention to leave alongside Gregor and begin his life anew.


Character Name: Jean Earnhardt
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: I am 5'10 160 Ibs with blonde hair and a blonde full beard. I am also lean and not real bulky. I wear a red top and leather pants and boots.
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

"Hello stranger!"

"I'm here exploring the vast cities of the realm like I've always dreamed." "Perhaps you could help me to find a place to rest my feet and and feed my belly?"

*waits for response*

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

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  • Your skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message AudryTheOddity! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at AudTheOdd#1560

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- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ AudTheOdd#1560]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message AudryTheOddity to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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 New Player Application Guide - New Player - The Lord Of The Craft 

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